Dozens of New York cooling towers test positive for Legionnaires’ bacteria as outbreak reaches 60 cases

Dozens of New York cooling towers – Thinking Process: 1. **Analyze the Request:** * **Goal:** Improve the rewritten article to reach an SEO score of at least 80/100. * **Source:** CNN article about Legionnaires’ outbreak in NYC cooling towers (July 14, 2026). * **Original Title:** Dozens of New York cooling towers test positive for Legionnaires’ bacteria as outbreak reaches 60 cases. * **Focus Keyword:** “Dozens of New York cooling” (Note: The user provided this specific phrase as the focus keyword, though it looks slightly truncated or specific. I need to ensure this exact phrase or a very close variation is used naturally). * **Current SEO Gaps:** * Title length: 103 chars (Ideal: 35-75). * Keyword mentions: 14 (Target: 3-12). * **Rules:** * Language: English. * Facts: Accurate, no invented names/dates/numbers. * Keyword Placement: Natural in opening paragraph and body. * Format: Clean HTML (`

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Legionella Outbreak Expands Across Upper East Side as Cooling Tower Testing Continues

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